After the war, Draco had to redeem the Malfoy name, so he forged his own way in the wizarding world by creating a new section of mental healing called Psychediving. His latest patient is Auror Harry Potter who is apparently a pathological liar, and who also just tried to violently end his own life. Something about Harry’s condition keeps nagging at Draco, and in his arrogance, he refuses to quit until he figures out what. So, he dives into Harry’s soul and in the process finds out that Harry has been cursed. The curse makes people believe that whatever he says is a lie and see the worst in him. So, Draco gives him a piece of his soul to circumvent the curse.
Draco also discovers that Potter's suicide attempt was that he could escape into the muggle world and disappear for good. The story ends with Draco helping Harry escape from the hospital and telling him to go to Malfoy Manor.
The story is extremely well constructed and edited. The progression of the story is easily followed and it grips the reader right in. It is slightly too descriptive in places but it doesn’t detract from the story at all. One thing to keep in mind while reading this fiction is that it's a Harry/Draco pre-slash fic.
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While the plot line of the story was funny and it is believable that Peter would do something like this, I found that Peter was out of character, and the story itself needed additional editing to help it flow better.
This is a sequel to "A Reckless Frame of Mind". It continues on with both Harry and Draco teaming up and trying to figure out who cursed Harry and why. It turns out that it was the current Minister of Magic that did it, because he was afraid that Harry was going to take over his position. In the process of the story, Harry hooks up with Draco and Harry deals with his issues that arouse from his curse and starts to rebuild his ruined relationships. Draco also takes his revenge on the people who hurt Harry in the process.
The story was well written and well edited. There was a meticulous attention to detail and it keeps you reading right through to the end. If I had any complaints, it would be that the inward angst of the characters and their thought monologue tented to drag on a bit. Also, please be aware that this is a Harry/Draco slash fic.
This is a funny story about Peter's stupidity. He runs into a black man in the street with a skin condition that turns his skin white. Peter commiserates with the man about the horrors of having white skin. Peter leaves the man feeling confused and heads home. He tells Lois what happened, and how awful it is to have white skin. Of course Lois tells him then that He’s white, so runs to the bathroom were he starts screaming when he sees that he’s white.
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For a fluffy piece, it fell below the mark, and the six year olds didn’t act like 6 year olds. I couldn’t get the sense of children interacting in this fiction, but other than that and a few grammar mistakes, the story was not bad.
This is fluffy piece of fiction, where Naruto and Sasuke are 6 years old and are friends in school. On Monday morning everyone has to make a paper hat, which they all do successfully, except for Naruto. He is sad because he doesn’t want to disappoint his friend. So, he takes papers home with him and practices making paper hats. Sasuke appears at his window and helps him with it.
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This is a humorous fan fiction that involves Sakura bashing. The members of team seven are sent out on a minor mission that turns major, when they are confronted by some missing ninjas. Of course their sensei is nowhere to be found, so Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura have to fight on their own. One minute into the fight, Sakura starts crying and whining about how she can be useful to the team, and not a burden. Naruto and Sasuke finally have had enough of her uselessness and leave her to prove her metal. Needless to say, she dies, leaving the rest of the team feeling as if a weight has been lifted.
This is a humorous fan fiction that involves Sakura bashing. The members of team seven are sent out on a minor mission that turns major, when they are confronted by some missing ninjas. Of course their sensei is nowhere to be found, so Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura have to fight on their own. One minute into the fight, Sakura starts crying and whining about how she can be useful to the team, and not a burden. Naruto and Sasuke finally have had enough of her uselessness and leave her to prove her metal. Needless to say, she dies, leaving the rest of the team feeling as if a weight has been lifted.
The story is very well edited, with no grammatical or spelling mistakes. Also it is a very humorous piece that I recommend to everyone who hates Sakura. The only critique about this fiction was it’s length. It was a bit too descriptive for a comedic piece.
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